Benediction, acknowledgements for A Walk in Darkness…unedited…

I’m unsure of how to do this, only because I’ve focused on writing A Walk in Darkness and haven’t taken the time to research on how to write one properly. Still, this is what I have in mind. If you guys don’t mind, I thought I would try it out here.

To my parents, Larry and Anne, thank you for being the ray of light in my world when all I could see was darkness.

To my Brothers and Sisters who never returned from the killing fields: You are missed. You are not forgotten.

There are several more I need to add but, I’m finishing up the story. What do you guys think? Too cheesy? Not cheesy enough? I’d appreciate some feedback. Feel free to post your suggestions in the comments. Thanks much.

Freeman


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